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UFS 211 Unit 10 : Academic Writing ( TASK 10 )

9:57 PM |

Suster Ngesot tells the story of two girls, who live near where their college dorm. They called vira and Silla, who are good friends with each other. Vira has a boyfriend; a student from australia named Mike. Vira and Silla occupied a room that once was never inhabited by other students due to certain reasons. The room turned out to save the mystery death of a former student named Lastri. Introduction between Silla and Mike, being the beginning of the emergence of mystery around them. Silla and mike apparently having an affair behind Vira, which triggers anger Suster Ngesot. Death will terrorize those who had an affair, the region dormitory. Before someone dies, it first appears in a green diary, which found by Vira in her room. Vira can feel there is an anomaly that appears. Mystery death of Suster Lastri began to unfold. Suster Lastri s was killed by her boyfriend, who is a doctor named Framle. Her boyfriend caught cheating predictably friend, named Eva. His body was buried in the walls of the room vira and Silla. Suster Lastri grudge to all the adultery. Finally Silla and Mike died, caused outrage Suster Ngesot, above the affair which they did, behind vira.

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UFS 211 Unit 9 : Academic Writing ( TASK 9 )

9:51 PM |

There are a few ways in which the lie detector can be used. Firstly, this machine can be used without a subject's knowledge has been introduced in Britain. The Dektor psychological stress analyzer (PSE) is used by private industry for pre-employment screening,investigating thefts, and even periodic staff checks. Besides, in the US,the device is used for pre-employment interviews with questions such as 'Have you used marihuana? and for monthly checks with branch managers, asking questions like 'Do you suspect any present employees of cheating the company? that is prevent a manager from setting his own pace to investigate possibly suspicious behavior. Moreover, it also can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues totally unrelated to job , and then the PSE can be used without the subject even knowing, its inventors analysed the televised Watergate hearings and told the press who they thought was lying. Other than that, there are few objections found in this machine. Finally, one of the other two units was being employed by a private firm for pre-employment checks. It also possible to pick out a word or phrase that caused stress. Lastly, its a primary application will be in situations where people may not object such as pre-employment interviews.

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UFS 211 Unit 8 : Editing and revising (TASK 8 )

9:46 PM |

"Don't ever let somebody tell you you can't do something. You got a dream, you gotta protect it. Moreover,if you want something, go get it. Period."
In Columbia Pictures' The Pursuit of Happiness, Chris Gardner (Will Smith) is a bright and talented but marginally employed salesman. Struggling to make ends meet, Gardner finds himself and his five-year-old son evicted from their San Francisco apartment with nowhere to go. When Gardner lands an internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm, he and his son endure many hardships, including living in shelters, in pursuit of his dream of a better life for the two of them.
Besides,Chris Gardner (Will Smith) is a family man struggling to make ends meet. Despite his valiant attempts to help keep the family afloat, the mother (Thandie Newton) of his five-year-old son Christopher (Jaden Christopher Syre Smith) is buckling under the constant strain of financial pressure. No longer able to cope, she reluctantly decides to leave.
Chris, now a single father, continues doggedly to pursue a better-paying job using every sales skill he knows. He lands an internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm, and although there is no salary, he accepts, hopeful he will end the program with a job and a promising future. Without a financial cushion, Chris and his son are soon evicted from their apartment and forced to sleep in shelters, bus stations, bathrooms, or wherever they can find refuge for the night.
Finally, despite his troubles, Chris continues to honor his commitment as a loving and caring father, using the affection and trust his son has placed in him as an impetus to overcome the obstacles he faces.

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UFS 211 unit 7 : The narrative paragraph -1 (TASK 7 )

4:31 AM |

MY UNFORGETTABLE CHILDHOOD MEMORY

I think childhood are the best time of all in my life sometimes when recalled it back it can make me smile. Childhood is the most beautiful memory that not be forgotten, because has a like feeling sad, painful, joyful, and terrifying and so on.

A long time ago, kids just like to play the ground but now days, you can see a lot internet gaming, like iPad,psp,game boy and so forth understand, times grew more and more advanced. Technology also grew more and more sophisticated.

The most memorable game i love is we called as “nyorok-nyorok” because i like hoarding. At the time, i am the one who must to find out my friend that hiding at anywhere just counted for then 50 times, unfortunately after i keep coming. I’m not going to find my friends just go home, then all my friends looking at me at my home, but i don’t want to meet them. But i do not mind if i remember back, it’s the one memory that very funny for me.

Moreover, when i being forced to eat the medicine, i really do not like to eat up piled because in my opinion when was a kid, the medicine can make people die. I’m scared to eat medicine when the time coming, I’m hiding at the back door in my room. But now i was is 19 years old just want to advice you is fueling me to not hate drugs indefinitely they are beneficial to us and not to harm.

The last thing I’m not forget id since i was childhood. I do not like balloons as well especially if it had exploded i will feel like my heart want to lose it. I really don’t like go to any party, like birthday party, because there will have a lot of balloons. I’m quite scare with the entire balloon. The sounds when it setting exploded, just like a bomb. Therefore, i become anti to balloons until today. I cannot deal myself with this kind of feeling.

The conclusion, childhood memories are memories that I miss which cannot turn back. I really miss my childhood memories, which are my friends which is my friend who played with me in while kids, is still fresh in my mind.

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UFS 211 unit 6 : Mechanical/Grammer (TASK 6 )

6:54 AM |

What
 are the common mistakes that u always do in writing? Do you find 
writing in English is difficult? What kind of problem do you face when 
you start writing? What are your suggestions to overcome the problem? 
Discuss.

My problem when I’m do is grammar, sometimes i don't know how to put the grammar, is it past tense or future tense. Its really make my mind become so blur, I always weak in grammar. That is why sometimes I get a nice mark but sometimes I get a poor result. Second, I always feel not confident with my grammar when I’m do writing because if i do a grammar mistake it can give effect to my writing.In addition, always my problem when making my writing is often lacking in ideas and very slow when describing the contents of this important.Lastly, I can't get the good idea to my writing and always spend a long time to think my good idea also I always give the same idea to my writing; I can't think more idea again.In my opinion way to improve my writing skills is practice and always do a revision everyday, only this way can make me easy to do a good writing in English.Besides,I need to work hard to read and look for additional knowledge through the Internet, dictionaries, or books and newspapers, but not least a good way to increase the use of English language by looking at the television or radio and I need to be sensitive to those around who communicate with me using English because in this way, it can accelerate and facilitate the making of writing myself without substance problem I always face.

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UFS 211 Unit 5 : Writing a paragraph 1 (TASK 5 )

3:44 AM |

Water pollution is the introduction into fresh or ocean waters of chemical, physical, or biological material that degrades the quality of the water and affects the organisms living in it. This process ranges from simple addition of dissolved or suspended solids to discharge of the most insidious and persistent toxic pollutants. The presence in water of harmful or objectionable material in sufficient quantity to measurably degrade water quality. Next, water pollution is defined as any direct or indirect changes to the physical properties, thermal, biological, or radioactive which any part of the environmental release, remove, or put this waste to the detriment of its usefulness and cause a dangerous situation and harm health, safety and welfare of the public, or other life such as birds, wildlife, fish and aquatic life and water plants. The main cause of water pollution is the dumping of garbage from residential areas along the rivers, the lakes and the sea. Disposal of waste materials such as garbage, oil, and uncontrollable bowel will cause water properties change and lead to contamination. For example, the Water treatment Plant between polluted rivers caused by pig faces around 1980's. Polluted rivers will flow to the sea and thus lead to pollution of the sea and attitude of some unscrupulous factory operators remove toxic waste into rivers or the sea also led to water pollution. Water pollution will affect to human health because require brain water content in 74%, 75% muscle, blood 82%, 22% bone, tooth 5%, heart kidney 69% and 82%, Humans can survive for weeks without food, but without air, will cause dehydration and will die within a few days. Why is water so important? Water is very important to help the digestion, absorption and elimination of food eaten. In addition, water helps the excretion of waste from the intestines and kidneys. Other functions of the water in our body are to align body temperature 24/7 and provide smooth movement of joints and membranes. Almost 92 percent of the blood is water. Blood is a transport system that works 'distribute' nutrients throughout the body. While the body secretions and digestive juices are almost entirely water. Besides that, the digestive system produces nearly 1.7 litters of saliva each day. Preventive measures is mass media and electronic media play an important role to raise public awareness about the importance of river awareness campaign should be conducted through television, newspapers and the like to bring awareness to the community about the importance of water in everyday life. By organizing this campaign aims to inculcate an attitude of love for nature and enforce laws to prevent the recurrence of pollution this as well as cooperation from the public in order to reduce incidents occur in our country. If we consider the earth as our own home, would we foul him? The conclusion, the pollution problem will not be resolved if there is no self-consciousness in people about the importance of the environment to human health, the environment clean and protected reflect a harmonious and healthy society for leading the development of science and technology. The saying goes "if we pour chemicals into an organism, it appears as though, by we threw a sack of nuts screws and pegs into the machinery" Delicate "who ever created’.

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UFS 211 Unit 4: Introduction of a paragraph ( TASK 4)

12:35 AM |

In this writing paper is very much taking about the time before starting the process of this writing,we will take the time to think,and started writing this.In the writing process will involve thinking in making a sentence.This process is known as communication,writing process,it is one step of the writing test to learn our language in communicating their ideas and experiences.And it will also take a very much to solve the writing process.In addition,the writing process is also divided into five sections as planning,revising, editing,and publishing the planning stage.In the planning stage is to determine the title and decide which ideas to use.Then will decide how to order the ideas.Sometimes these topics will make it easier importance of ideas, it is also very important to take every step that is required in the writing process.In reciting and listening, this information puts the use of research in their own words,in verse paragraphs although not perfect,then show it to others and ask for suggestions.Among the things opponents,re-examine the work has been changed by rewriting the entire paragraph and include all the information required.In reading and listening,a slight increase in the editing is different from the study of sentences and individual words and editing must be done after major revision.After that,the study was to evaluate the text refers to language and technical content and this is the part where we have been given the ability to actually scan our language test for accuracy. Finally,but not least is that we will do the work yourself.

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UFS 211 Unit 10 : Academic Writing ( TASK 10 )

UFS 211 Unit 9 : Academic Writing ( TASK 9 )

UFS 211 Unit 8 : Editing and revising (TASK 8 )

UFS 211 unit 7 : The narrative paragraph -1 (TASK 7 )

UFS 211 unit 6 : Mechanical/Grammer (TASK 6 )

UFS 211 Unit 5 : Writing a paragraph 1 (TASK 5 )

UFS 211 Unit 4: Introduction of a paragraph ( TASK 4)